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Sunday, September 7, 2008

...the next chapter

i’m writing the next chapter…
of this thing we’ve termed love
The “not-so-sure-anymore” stage
The “why-me” stage
The “i’m-not-good-enough-for-you” stage

The QuEsTiOnS stage…
worsened by circumstances clearly seen

surety is best friends with doubt
confidence and confusion trudge hand-in-hand
Love is asking one word heavy queries like, “Really?”
packed with layers of choking difficulty -
uncalled and called for
… meaningless investigative dialogue
back-tracking to where the tree became a log
luscious beauty now may be a condemned necessity
What’s the learnable lesson?

But this may not be she -
in her …totality
Will you ever know? Will I?

Is this over?

5 peculiar people said...:

Thirty + said...

I am first will be back to read gotta dash

All-Mi-T [Thought Crime] Rawdawgbuffalo said...

just finish hon and grow u will be fine

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Chizoba said...

Thanks a lot. Loved it

laspapi said...

What's going on, dscr?be

To rephrase- what's gone on? Where'd it go?

And don't tell me we you were just writing...